Comments on: How a dog thief turned philanthropist led me to a lipstick inspired shooting story

By: amfortas

amfortas — Sat, 19 Jul 2008 15:26:57 +0000

What is a nice girl like you doing in a place like that? You are leading me into temptation with a comparatively tame little tale, very nicely written, but surrounded by utter depravity. Have you looked at the company you are keeping? The words used ! By the Lord Harry, I was stuck in there for hours!

Your words were chaste and well ordered and hardly a purient one in sight. I think the nearest to the money that you got was ‘fishnet pantihose’, hardly the most alluring. It didn’t even have a name ! I think you need to do some research in the Lingerie Depatment of your local big store to see what they are calling intimate ladies’ items these days.

Your story was considerably more complex than practically any of the small sample of others that I read. (about 650 before I managed to escape). They were for for research purposes you understand.

The husband was a very understanding chap and few would be so forgiving of a wife who blew her stack – instead of him – and shot him. And as a chap, I can attest, that if a huge amount of lipstick was deposited on me, I would notice it. But I was pleased to see that she went to jail for her actions. It was a fiction story after all.

Now. When are you going to write something really rude? You might need to use a pseudonym.

By: Denise Noe

Denise Noe — Sat, 19 Jul 2008 14:22:55 +0000

amfortas, your comment still isn’t up at my story. I think you may have input it incorrectly. Could you try again, friend?

By: amfortas

amfortas — Thu, 17 Jul 2008 11:56:26 +0000

There are 6 comments there for you and mine should have been the seventh. But maybe they have a time lapse, like MND does, or a scrutineer to make sure nothing rude is put on their site (splutter, splutter, gwfahw)

Perhaps we should send a search party from MND to find it. There’s safety in numbers.

By: Denise Noe

Denise Noe — Thu, 17 Jul 2008 11:28:13 +0000

amfortas, I’ve read your comments here and find them interesting. : ) I didn’t see any comments on the other website where the story is actually posted.

By: amfortas

amfortas — Thu, 17 Jul 2008 08:18:09 +0000

Well written as usual, Denise, but compared to the commotions in the other rooms, it was a tad tame. Fishnet pantihose indeed ! I hope you read my comments

By: amfortas

amfortas — Thu, 17 Jul 2008 07:52:19 +0000

DENISE !

You wrote a story for LITEROTICA ??

Naughty dog. Naughty dog.

And you want ME to go there.

I suppose I will have to trot off over there to read it, but if I get diverted to sniffing around more fragrant and flagrant parts, it will be ALL your fault. And woe betide you if I am perverted and corrupted and lose all sense of decency. I might just come back here and leave differently toned comments !